Here is a recent question that appeared in IELTS writing exam. In this article we will provide you the model answer to the question along with the important vocabulary and phrases in the passage.
The question as quoted in the Writing Section II in the IELTS Writing Exam
‘In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?’
Analysing the question we see that it is about criminal activities being shown on television in certain countries. Since the question asks us if there are more advantages to this or more disadvantages we need to state both the advantages and the disadvantages and speak about which of the two have a greater prominence.
Before going ahead to read the model answer, we would recommend you to write the answer to the question yourself. Then go ahead to read the model answer to get a better idea.
The model band-8 answer given by our mentor Bhavana is:
In recent years, criminal trials have been televised in some countries to allow the public an opportunity to watch them. I believe, although there are advantages, making trials public can lead to too much injustice and other problems.
One of the main advantages of allowing court trials to be broadcast on TV is that the entire judicial system is open to the public to watch and supervise. In some countries where the judicial system is corrupt, it would be a step forward towards more justice by televising the trials as it is overseen by the public. Another benefit is that opening the doors of the court room allows the public rights to information. The public have a right to know the details of trials so that they can form their own opinions. This is important in countries where the government has restricted public access to information.
On the other hand, allowing trials to be shown on TV has serious consequences. Firstly, the public might form opinions which are based on mass media bias and a lack of understanding of the legal system. This public and media pressure might affect the outcome of the trial and justice will not be served. Secondly, the legal team might see this as an opportunity to promote themselves which means they may be distracted and not put all their attention into defending or prosecuting. Lastly, the jury is supposed to decide the verdict but by televising the trial, the entire public removes the effectiveness of a jury system.
In conclusion, regardless of the benefits, the disadvantages of an open televised trial can be devastating due to public and media pressure which might result in a lack of justice.
Important Vocabulary and Phrases
Some of the good words and phrases used in the passage are:
- Judicial system
- Rights to Information
- Justice not serves
- On the other hand,…
- In some countries,…
- In conclusion,…
- In the essay you will notice that the second paragraph is a description of the main idea i.e. advantages of televising the court trials.
- And the second paragraph is the drawbacks of televising the court trails.
- You have to use similar strategies while writing an essay.
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